Thursday, February 25, 2016

PB3A: Shakin' Things Up

My scholarly article is titled “How Students Use Prior Genre” by Reiff and Bawarshi; the goals of the experiment were to determine what genres students already know, to observe how students use this prior knowledge when presented with new writing assignments, and to understand student’s methods of transferring genre into new ideas to fit their needs. Reiff and Bawarshi also endeavored to determine how one may predict if a student would be a “boundary crosser” or a “boundary guarder.” Reiff and Bawarshi defined boundary crossers as “students who engaged in high-road transfer as they repurposed and reimagined their prior genre knowledge for use in new contexts”, and boundary guarders as “students who seemed to guard more tightly and engage in low-road transfer of their prior genre knowledge, even in the face of new and disparate tasks.” They identified these two types of students based on their answers to set questions that answered the research questions presented above. Reiff and Bawarshi categorized students who were less confident in their abilities to identify genre, and were more open to new ideas of genre as boundary crossers. They categorized students who were confident in their ability to define and identify genre, and therefore more set in their ways as boundary guarders.
My idea for transforming this article into a new genre for a younger generation, is fairly simple. I am going to adopt the persona of a “boundary guarder” in this experiment and write a letter home to my parents telling them all about my first few weeks at college. This letter will obviously try to depict a first year student writing home to their parents for the first time, so it will not be entirely about their first year writing class, but their first year all together. A good portion of the letter will be how I would envision a “boundary guarder” answering some of the questions presented in “How Students Use Prior Genre.” I will probably exaggerate the confident persona that is indicative of a “boundary guarder” to ensure that my ideas are clear. I am concerned, however, about the length of this letter. I know that I will need to keep it realistic, and therefore can’t be more than a page and a half (what can I say? I’m a bit wordy). I might make the letter longer than realistic to ensure I present as much information as I need to.

I’m fairly concerned about my idea for transforming the article for an older audience. I decided that I’d like to write the script for a gameshow, similar to something like Family Feud. I have absolutely no idea yet what I would call it, but I’m going to try for something really witty. I think that this genre would be appropriate for an older audience because game shows are only on during the day and the only people who have time during the day to watch game shows would be a much older audience consisting of retired persons. In the game show, the contestant will be given a genre and they will have to imagine different ways that some strategies of that genre could be used, for example the genre of “compare and contrast essays” has strategies that could be used to convince your spouse that it really is a good idea to go on that Alaskan cruise, or to persuade the CEO of a company that your product is better and more efficient than the competitors. I am definitely going to play around with this idea and figure out how to make it less complicated, if anyone has any input on that I’d love to hear it! Any other feedback on any part of my ideas would be most welcome! Thanks J

5 comments:

  1. Hi!

    Very interesting PB3A - I like how you gave a bit of a summary about your article so that I have background knowledge on the topic! YOUR KID IDEA IS SO COOL! That is such a creative way to use the information from the article and implement it in a real world application, but maybe consider an email since letters are a bit outdate? Or if its more effective to implement the conventions, use a letter - just a thought! I understand your concern about the length, but I doubt Zack is looking for quantity, but rather quality, so I think forget about "realistic" in length and maybe make a note that this is the one letter convention that you are breaking. Because depending on the kid's personality, maybe they write a 1 page letter or a 5 page letter!
    I think that the gameshow script will be really fun for you to write because you can use so much of your own voice and personality throughout the piece. I'm a bit lost through the middle of your explanation, but I totally understand how hard it was to put brainstorming thoughts into cohesive words on a page. Maybe try to do a little thought map on a few different genres, and then some major conventions of the genre, and then try to apply it to real world cases like the Alaskan cruise debate, etc. I think you can really go in a lot of directions for this and that your WP has a ton of potential!

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  2. Bronwyn -

    I really like your idea for transforming the article into a letter back home for the younger audience. Although you think you might have to keep it short, I feel like you are less restricted than you think. Letters to home could be PAGES long, and I doubt any parents would mind reading a long letter from their beloved child. There is no "correct" length for a letter back home - it could be five sentences or five pages! Anyways, I really like the idea, but what moves will you be making in the letter? What conventions of a letter to home will you be using? For example, since you're writing home to your parents, your language can be pretty casual and informal. You're also going to be using subjective language, since you're writing as yourself. Think about those and other conventions of a letter to home you want to implement.

    For your older audience, I think you have a killer idea with the game show script. You could even do something like Jeopardy, with different categories about genres or whatever you think would work best! It might be a little tricky of a concept, but I have no doubts that you will execute it well. I wish you the best of luck, and I can't wait to see what you come up with!

    Piper Harris

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  3. Bronwyn,

    Way to go sister—I love how creative your WP3 ideas are. This—“I am going to adopt the persona of a “boundary guarder” in this experiment and write a letter home to my parents telling them all about my first few weeks at college. This letter will obviously try to depict a first year student writing home to their parents for the first time, so it will not be entirely about their first year writing class, but their first year all together. A good portion of the letter will be how I would envision a “boundary guarder” answering some of the questions presented in “How Students Use Prior Genre.” I will probably exaggerate the confident persona that is indicative of a “boundary guarder” to ensure that my ideas are clear”—is suuuuuuper cool.

    Regarding your concern about letter length—one possible way around this is to make a SERIES of letter over the course of the academic year. How has their thinking about writing/genres changed (or, in this case, not changed) from quarter to quarter, course to course? That could provide a really authentic time lapse that’s so crucial to understanding Reiff and Bawarshis’s central argument.

    With regard to your game show idea, I’m not quite sure that I’m seeing the connections. Did a Family Feud-esque idea come to you before you read this scholarly piece? If so, you might be forcing the transformation a bit. I guess one way you could think about this is: what aspects (plural) are “transformable” from the initial piece? Once you think about that, THEN you can think about different genres that you could create, tailored to an older audience. Whatever you choose, I want you to be deliberate—have good reasons for everything that you’re doing. Outside-the-box is totally OK—in fact, it’s preferable—but I don’t want you to force it. What ABOUT boundary guarders/crossers is pertinent to the genres that adults use in their many different, various literate activity?

    Z

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  4. Bronwyn,

    Your letter idea is great! I can easily see how the contents of the article can transfer into your letter home. I love how you decided to write from an exaggerated perspective to really show your readers the characteristics and typical responses of a boundary guarder. As for the length, I would definitely try to make it as realistic as possible. Zack has said multiple times that quality matters more than quantity! I think you have a lot of potential with the game show script idea. The language and tone of gameshows alone give you a lot to work with! I agree that this idea is a little complicated. Your example of compare and contrast essays makes sense, however, one thing you might want to think about is the fast paced nature of game-shows. Contestants don’t have time to explain their answers or thought process. Overall, really great ideas! Good luck with WP3!

    -Alexandra

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  5. Hey Bronwyn,

    In this class you've continuously impressed me with your wit and creativity and I just thought I should let you know that. (It never hurts to hear nice things about yourself).

    I'm really loving the way that you picked a specific part of the article that you chose and how you want to create a persona for yourself as a "boundary guarder". I think that doing a letter from that perspective will really challenge your knowledge of what being a "boundary guarder" entails and will require a lot of creative effort to make realistic and engaging. I definitely think that you're up to the task! I am super excited to see where you take this and can't wait for the end result! Best of luck!

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