Sunday, January 10, 2016

PB1A

                A Thank You card/letter is, I think, a good example of a genre. I learned a specific way to write them, and have only expanded on what I was initially taught. Whether you are thanking someone for a gift, their help in some way, or their presence at an event, the basic outline of the card is simple. You begin with addressing the recipient, followed by an expression of gratitude, and then you sign the missive: “Dear Mr. Smith, Thank you so much for healing my leg. Thank you again, Susie.”  You could add something along the lines of “It is so much better know, and I have full use of it!” to further emphasize your gratefulness.
                The audience of a Thank You card/letter is only intended to be the person(s) the card is addressed to, and perhaps their family/friends if they choose to share, therefore a Thank You card/letter can be a very personalized letter. Generally, informal writing is common in this genre, but formal writing is acceptable if you are not acquainted with the person(s) you are thanking. For example, if the Dean of your college grants you the ability to enroll in more than the maximum amount of units for a quarter, you would consider sending him/her a letter or email expressing your gratitude. This would not be a necessarily comfortable email. It would be respectful and at least mostly formal, depending on how well you know the Dean. You would address the Dean in a professional manner, “Dear Dean Smith….” You would then get right into the meat of the subject. You wouldn’t include a greeting of “Happy New Year” or “How are you?” because those are too familiar and not appropriate for such a respected audience. You would begin with “I wanted to express my gratitude that you permitted me to take the classes I’ve requested.” You may wish to include an assurance that you won’t take the privilege of extra units for granted and will do your best in all of them, but don’t elaborate on it, simply, “I will strive for excellence in these classes.” You could include another statement of appreciation because this is really a time to suck up, “I genuinely appreciate this vote of confidence.” Or something equally cheesy. Thank you notes are best kept short and sweet unless it’s to a family member or close friend, so now would be a good time to finish up and sign the bottom of the page with a “Sincerely, John Smith”.
                The purpose of writing a Thank You note is to ensure that you can adequately express your thanks to someone who has aided you or given you something. The times I most often find myself writing a Thank You note is after a gift giving occasion. In this instance, a less formal writing style is appropriate, and depending on how well you know the recipient of the note, you can elaborate on why you appreciate the gift, or how useful it is. If you received an article of clothing then state how you’ve already worn it, or are excited to have an opportunity to.

                The tone of a Thank You note is always appreciative and, you guessed it, thankful, but the formality of it depends on the recipient of the note. A Thank You note is a Thank you note or letter or card when it contains an expression of thanks in anyway shape or form. Anything else included in the letter are simply conventions that are common to the genre.

7 comments:

  1. Dear Bronwyn,

    Thank you so much for taking the time to explore the genre of Thank-You letters on your blog. Your analysis really illuminated to conventions, audience, and purpose of this sort of writing piece. Though I strive to express my gratitude as often as possible in life, I have not done this is in the form of a letter in quite some time, and your PB1 has inspired me to start. By paying close attention to the individual audience and personalizing my letters to whom they are addressed, I hope to make a real difference in the lives of people who have shown me kindness or generosity. Your observation that thank you letters tend to be concise and simple was quite insightful as well, so I will keep that in mind while formulating my letters. I appreciate the effort that you put into this piece, it will surely help me to better express my gratitude in life!

    Thanks again,
    Tyler

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  2. You did a good a job analysing the purpose, audience and characteristics of a Thank You letter in detail. There are specific examples to help demonstrating the idea. This piece offers me some good advices on how to show gratitude properly through texts. It is a good point that the style of the language depends on who is the recipient of the letter. The words would be more casual if we are writing an email to thank our friends for birthday gifts, compare to writing to the dean of the university. A Thank You letter should be concise and the tone of it should be thankful.

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  3. Bronwyn,

    First off, good job on your first PBA. I believed you set up your pba in a very well structured way. I liked how you address the different types of a thank you card/letter. You allowed to the reader to get a grasp on how there are specific ways in which you should write a thank you letter depending on the audience. You exemplified the importance of knowing your audience. For example, you showed that in some cases they can be very formal, if its a close friend or just a quick remark. In other cases, as you referred to a thank you letter to a dean, you must have a much more formal and appreciative sense of tone. Although you did explain the importance of knowing your audience, I think it you should have touched upon the constraints or limitations a thank you card can have. Otherwise, you very clear on the information you expressed to the reader so great job!

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  4. Bronwyn,

    “Thank you” cards a great way to think about genre (and their conventions). Like you mentioned, this genre tends to be a little bit template-y—it has a pretty standard “outline,” as you say, and that’s perfectly fine. It’s a perfect way to think about genre in terms of their form/content. It’s important to remember, though, that genres (and their conventions) can, and do, expand. (I’m not suggesting you thought of them in the “wrong” way or anything, fyi!) In fact, thinking of the specific audience that the note/letter is directed towards shows just how much range/variation there is—as you mentione, a “thank you” note to a dean is likely going to look a lot different compared to grandma or grandpa.

    Nice work.

    Z

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  5. Bronwyn,

    To begin, I liked how you addressed that all Thank You notes follow a similar outline. No matter what someone is giving thanks for, the letter typically follows a certain template. Furthermore, you did a good job of recognizing that the tone of the letter can vary depending on how well acquainted the writer is with the reader. For example, if you are sending a thank you note to your Aunt, your prose will probably be a lot more casual and informal than if it were being sent to the governor of California. Your letter to the governor would be much more professional and thought out, whereas the letter to your aunt would seem more conversational. Overall, I thought your PB1A essay addressed everything in the prompt and executed it well. :)

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  6. Bronwyn,
    I enjoyed reading this and it is apparent that you have experience with writing thank you notes. You displayed a clear understanding of the genre by addressing it in three different segments. First the address to whomever the note is to, the body of the note and how formal it should or should not be depending on whom the note is for, and lastly signing the letter. I thought it was especially insightful that you gave an example of a formal thank you note, with the dean, as well as an informal one such as receiving a gift from a friend. Your PB includes a great rhetorical analysis along with examples to make it easily understandable.

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  7. I really loved your analysis on thank you notes and found all of your example quotes scarily relatable. I liked how you discussed the personal nature of writing a thank you note to somebody and something that made me think of is hand-writing vs. typing thank you notes. Some people might argue that a hand-written note is much nicer and more personal but I know that my hand writing looks equivalent to a first grade student's and I don't think a hand-written thank you note from me would be appropriate in very many contexts. Just food for thought! Loved reading this!

    Best
    -Dan

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